This was released Wednesday 17/10/18
A crime has happen and I would like if any witness that saw it to came ford.
If you know anything I would like to ask some questions to help me solve this crime.
I will only give you little information. This crime was done in a class space but you are not to worry we will handle it.
So is you saw something be sure to came and tell us thank you.
Hmmm I think you might need to go back and make a few changes to your media release Tayler. You haven't told us any information about the crime for example that it was a break in or where it happened. If you would like witnesses to come forward they need to know a little bit about what happened but they really need to know where and when it happened. Mrs Lofts example was a really good place to start this week. Make sure that next week you check out the examples and tips the teachers give you, that way you have a lot more information to begin your post.
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